The Legend of Hunter: A New Beginning - Part 1 by SonicFreeColors1234, literature
Literature
The Legend of Hunter: A New Beginning - Part 1
--Hunter POV, 4:00 AM, Ignitus' Underground Lair--
I, Hunter of Avalar, am here to ask you to join me on my quest to find the legendary purple dragon, Spyro. Do you accept? Good, very well. We start now, there's no time to waste! C'mon, follow me to Ignitus' den, it's right around the corner. Why? Oh I forgot something.
"Sir Ignitus? May I come in?" I ask through the door. I await for his answer, looking at my claws in admiration. What's taking him so long? You think he's what? What does fapping mean? Shh! I hear him coming! What are you giggling about?
"Yes, Hunter?" Ignitus says as the door swings open, revealing a dirty, clutt
REWRITE - Sonadow: Hatred and Love [Part 2] by SonicFreeColors1234, literature
Literature
REWRITE - Sonadow: Hatred and Love [Part 2]
Amy can sure be a pain at times. Okay all the time. "Amy, can you please release me from your hold?" I said in an eloquent manner. She stares at me, that smile still spread across her muzzle. That bitch is in denial. "That means get off me, Ames." Why won't this freakin' hedgehog get off me? "TAILS!"
"What, Sonic?" the fox says as he runs out from the house. He's holding one of his gadgets in his hand. Looks deadly. Perfect.
"Um, what's in your hand, buddy?" I ask.
"This little thing?" he says holding his hand out to me. I inspect the object a little further before he continues. "It's just a translator for some languages."
"Like what, Tai
Supernatural - Two Worlds (Part 1) by SonicFreeColors1234, literature
Literature
Supernatural - Two Worlds (Part 1)
I was casually walking down the pavement, minding my own business, still dressed as Cass, when out of nowhere Jensen and Jared came running up to me. "Cass? Cass! Hey, Cass! Oh, thank god. What is all this, huh? W-w-what did Balthazar do to us?" I took this as some sort of prank, they were trying to mess with my mind a bit. I knew Jared too well, always playing tricks; but decided to play along with them. That is until I seemed to piss Jensen a little.
Pulling out my script, I said, "Man. Did they put out new pages?"
"New what?" Jensen asked.
"I mean, is this some kind
The Legend of Hunter: A New Beginning - Part 1 by SonicFreeColors1234, literature
Literature
The Legend of Hunter: A New Beginning - Part 1
--Hunter POV, 4:00 AM, Ignitus' Underground Lair--
I, Hunter of Avalar, am here to ask you to join me on my quest to find the legendary purple dragon, Spyro. Do you accept? Good, very well. We start now, there's no time to waste! C'mon, follow me to Ignitus' den, it's right around the corner. Why? Oh I forgot something.
"Sir Ignitus? May I come in?" I ask through the door. I await for his answer, looking at my claws in admiration. What's taking him so long? You think he's what? What does fapping mean? Shh! I hear him coming! What are you giggling about?
"Yes, Hunter?" Ignitus says as the door swings open, revealing a dirty, clutt
REWRITE - Sonadow: Hatred and Love [Part 2] by SonicFreeColors1234, literature
Literature
REWRITE - Sonadow: Hatred and Love [Part 2]
Amy can sure be a pain at times. Okay all the time. "Amy, can you please release me from your hold?" I said in an eloquent manner. She stares at me, that smile still spread across her muzzle. That bitch is in denial. "That means get off me, Ames." Why won't this freakin' hedgehog get off me? "TAILS!"
"What, Sonic?" the fox says as he runs out from the house. He's holding one of his gadgets in his hand. Looks deadly. Perfect.
"Um, what's in your hand, buddy?" I ask.
"This little thing?" he says holding his hand out to me. I inspect the object a little further before he continues. "It's just a translator for some languages."
"Like what, Tai
Supernatural - Two Worlds (Part 1) by SonicFreeColors1234, literature
Literature
Supernatural - Two Worlds (Part 1)
I was casually walking down the pavement, minding my own business, still dressed as Cass, when out of nowhere Jensen and Jared came running up to me. "Cass? Cass! Hey, Cass! Oh, thank god. What is all this, huh? W-w-what did Balthazar do to us?" I took this as some sort of prank, they were trying to mess with my mind a bit. I knew Jared too well, always playing tricks; but decided to play along with them. That is until I seemed to piss Jensen a little.
Pulling out my script, I said, "Man. Did they put out new pages?"
"New what?" Jensen asked.
"I mean, is this some kind
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